Don Tom, Apollo, and Elaina

Don Tomasso

1. Don Tomasso mentioned Mr. Evans death as well as Yelsnag park
2. Don Tomasso is a crime syndicate leader out of his glory days. Dante disappointment to Tomasso.
3. Don Tomasso, internally, crime family sucks, Dante is a lame, rebellious heir. Externally, Mr. Evans died.
4. We don’t know crimes the family has committed or why they live in Pointe Place?
5. What are the crime activities other than avocados?
6. We would like to hear more about Don Tomasso. We still don’t fully understand the crime scene significance in Pointe Place.

Apollo White
"There is no losing at the gym, you can’t get fired at the gym, as long as you show up and lift some weights you can have at least one success for the day."

1. Apollo mentions the gym and the death of Mr. Evans and sees George and Coco
2. Apollo enjoys working out. He is saddened by the death of Mr. Evans, he thought he was a nice guy. Wants to drink early.
3. Internally, Apollo really needs his buzz, Coffee and alcohol, he couldn’t  operate without it.
4. What does he do other than go to the gym and drink? It is unclear where his story will go next.
5. I want to know if there is more to him than just going to the gym and drinking. Maybe he will be written as a meathead who is thrusted into something out of his control, that would be cool in my opinion.

Elaina Crayton
" A couple minutes of
lingering told her something really bad had happened, but another glance at her watch told her
she didn’t have the time to find out, or work on wading through the people gathered to her car. "

1. She works in the public works building on 4th and she passes the crime scene that was created by Mr. Evans death. However, the character does not yet know that Mr. Evans is the one who died.
2. She drinks coffee a lot, she worked really hard in college, but now considers herself to be past her peak. She works at a job she hates and lives in her parent’s town. She gives readers the impression that she is not happy with the way things turned out.
3. Internal: Feels like she worked hard in school only to end up at a dead end job, wants a more exciting job etc. External: She is a caffeine addict and lives in her parent’s town
4. Will she ever get a new job? Does she like her parents? Does she live with her parents? Does she make a good living at her job?
5. I want to know more about what she does at her job, I want more details on the expectations she had for herself in college, I want to hear more about what she does for fun, does she have friends? Does she have fun? How old is she?