Master Gooway
- “Gooway was old but he emitted a youthful, powerful aura. Each movement he made felt as if it had a purpose to it.”
- Master Gooway is seeking information from Tyson, who he calls the “wisest man in Pointe Place.” This blog also revealed more of Gooway’s character through the subtle mannerisms he presents when relating with Tyson--character development.
- Gooway “needs” Tyson because he knows information that Gooway needs? Tyson is startled at first, implying that he does know a lot of information.
- What information are you looking for from Tyson? Why are you trying to find this person?
- Try to move the plot forward a little more by hinting to who the person is you are trying to find--maybe they know something about Mr. Evans’s murder or are guilty of something? Maybe go to the library and coincidentally run into the person you are looking for
Ollie- While Ollie did believe in many peculiar things, he had never thought of the possibility of a talking dog. “It’s impossible,” he thought to himself. “Maybe I saw somethin’ wrong…I was still pretty wasted,” he laughed.
- Ms. Maple has a German Shepard. A man in a blue uniform is asking Ollie about Mr. Evan’s murder.
- Tension between Maple and Ollie has been established as she mysteriously ran away from Ollie after he addressed her. It has not been developed yet.
- Did you see anything the night of Mr. Evans murder?
Did Maple seem nervous when you were talking to her?- Maybe go find maple in her apartment after talking to the man in the blue uniform and find out about her mysterious behavior.
Violet- “The soft glow of artisan candles bathed her hair in warm light as she slumped back in her chair.”
- Violet added a new character, Gloria, who was once her lover but is now one of her enemies. This blog post further explores Violet’s powers because she talks about how hard it is for her to be killed, and she mentions she will have to erase Georgie’s memory of seeing Gloria.
- Violet identifies her conflict to be Chico who is her enemy. However the plot in this blog post does not explore her relationship with Chico and we do not know why they are enemies. In this blog, Gloria poses a threat to Violet because Violet knows that Gloria wants to kill her. Violet takes care of Gloria in her apartment.
- What was your beginning like, meaning your childhood and upbringing? Do you use your powers for good to help people?
- Work on moving the plo forwards and writing more about your goals and intentions. Basically I am wondering what your character wants and what her purpose is and why does she live at Pointeplcae?
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