Jack, Marie and Maple

• Jack-
  1. “To Eliana, Marie, and Violet a Burro's tail because, well, he couldn't really explain why.”
  2. Jack’s love for nature and gardening is explored deeper.
  3. Nothing has really developed, and there is no real tension.
  4. “What is your favorite plant?” And “What is the personal significance of botanical sciences?”
  5. Bring in some tension/excitement. It feels boring.
  
  
  Marie
  
  
  1. I can’t see past him as being a criminal. I have told you often that because of his drug dealings, my mother’s life was taken brutally by one of the many enemies.
  2. You learn about her mother and father some. The mother is dead and the father is a criminal.
  3. She is seen as an outcast because she was not there for her father in her mother's death.
  4. What was your childhood like with you father? What do you do for a living?
  5. In the next blog you should include information about the mother and what she was like.
  
  
  Maple
  1. Everything is still. Except Maple, who was swiftly typing up the minimal information that she had found online so far.
  2. Maple is shown to be persistent. There is not a lot information available about Mr. Evans’s death
  3. She cannot find any information on Mr. Evans.
  4. How does your dog speak english? Why do you want to solve crimes?
  5. Maybe add some conflict between the dog and the Maple